Audience feedback on first draft of music video

POSITIVES:

• The pace of the cuts of the shots complements the pace of the song you have used
• The visuals are very high quality
• The location fits perfectly with your genre of Indie Folk
• The stoyline is grasping and represents the song lyrics
• It has a fairytale feel to it, almost as if she is Red Riding Hood, or the mother is Rupunzal - locked in the castle
• Costume and miseen scene have been cleverly thought about, considering the era you are trying to represent.
• The subplot of the mother waiting for her daughter gives the music video a bit more thought.

TO IMPROVE:

• The video is beautifully put together, however the 1950's era is not yet successfully portrayed. It might be due to the way the lighting is too bright. I suggest you use after effects to change the lighting a bit, add some special effects.
• The lighing changes in some shots, perhaps After Effects editing uing filter lights could improve it slighly.